25 Dec 2017 18:38:31
Wishing everyone a Merry Christmas! Ed001, if it's okay with you, i would love to write the next couple of match reviews so u could get a well deserved winter break! Also if you get the chance, could u give me your feedback on the Arsenal vs Liverpool review, so that i could make any improvements for next time!

{Ed001's Note - I would love you to carry on writing them mate, even when I am back as it is nice to have a couple of opinions for people to compare. If you want to thaat is.

I have only had a quick read through it, but the only thing I would say, for now, is to put more of your personality into it. Good grammar etc is great, but try and just tidy up your way of speaking using grammar, rather than trying to put things properly. It should feel natural to you when you read it back through, whereas that felt like you were trying to hold back from what you actually wanted to say.}

1.) 25 Dec 2017
25 Dec 2017 20:17:43
Thanx for d feedback mate! You are correct in saying that i was holding back a bit but it was not because i wanted to say something else rather i wanted to say more. I didn't want to make the review too long. But surely in the future articles, I would keep in mind of bringing my own personality into it.

2.) 25 Dec 2017
25 Dec 2017 23:21:13
If any of the EDDS are around,
Is JURGEN KLOPP a manager in denial, some of the quotes come out that he is a defensive coach, to counter act the reason critism is a joke, he is just making himself look a fool, and as for the backing of MINGO I can only say JURGEN that this fellow will get you the sack, he has let u and the fans down to many times, also JURGEN you will lose the fans if u keep telling the fans something that there not seeing.

{Ed002's Note - no idea.}

3.) 26 Dec 2017
26 Dec 2017 02:07:48
It's party season 002 just smile and wave.

4.) 26 Dec 2017
25 Dec 2017 20:29:45
Not that I have read the review written by SW15, but that is some great feedback, in general, from Ed1. The amount of time and dedication you guys put into this site is absolutely top notch. Cheers!

{Ed001's Note - cheers mate. I just look at it that if people just want to read the facts they would be reading AP, PA or Reuters reports, but no one does really. Instead we all read the news after someone has turned it into a story, rather than a statement of facts. The hard bit is making it an interesting story. For me the personality imbued is what makes something interesting to read, rather than those articles that are just done to a template and all basically the same. They are usually the clickbait sites that do that, each article is exactly the same, a nothing story with no interest added by the writer as s/he is just repeating verbatim the same style and exact layout in every story they write.}

5.) 26 Dec 2017
25 Dec 2017 22:43:12
Haha it's like reading a class report from Ed1, Sturbridge mate as he said a bit more of you and it will be better, good start tho and good read, keep it up! Merry xmas all.

6.) 26 Dec 2017
26 Dec 2017 08:49:58
If any of the EDDS are around,
Do u think that MINGO should be dropped today, or will he have a stay of execution.

{Ed025's Note - i think he will be dropped myself wembley..

7.) 26 Dec 2017
26 Dec 2017 10:29:32
Mingo will start today.

{Ed025's Note - if he does ron i will be very surprised, i know its only swansea but if i was karius or ward i would knocking on klopps door and asking for a move if he does start mate..